I wouldn't put it that way.. The amount of white is okay, but the right side is blank. I think there should be some hint of anything.If it's only a small line in the corner, then sure. But you want to make the entire piece intended, and not just put the entire thing off center for the sake of making it different.  If there's a reason there is so much space on the right, it's not really conveyed with the piece.

The forms are interesting; although the placement feels strange.  There is a clear definition of where the edges are, but within this oval area they are placed randomly.  Again, if this is intentional, I think you should  make it more clear in the piece.

The colors are good

The text doesn't bother me, but the gray areas are almost impossible to see. I'm not sure whether I like it.. but it does add another detail that the viewer doesn't notice until taking a closer/second look.

cool drawing! i love it.

i like the whole thing...nice colors, great drawing...and...i like the "too much white" great work man