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(#1) October 31, 2008 3:04:24 AM
tods
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gimme your critique plz :D

I NEED TO DONE THIS ARTWORK SOON
Please gimme your critique.... please... big_smile

http://fc84.deviantart.com/fs35/f/2008/305/c/e/Sacrifice_by_todoroki.jpg


Thanks for the attention


I've updated the artwork

http://fc76.deviantart.com/fs35/f/2008/305/4/c/Sacrifice_by_todoroki.jpg

Previously edited by tods (November 01, 2008 1:29:33 AM)

<a href="http://todoroki.deviantart.com">Tods Artwork</a>

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(#2) October 31, 2008 3:50:51 PM
Tree Fighter
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Re: gimme your critique plz :D

Looks cool but it's flat and kind've a plain background


http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g73/lillaosboy/8-14300-1.png
http://imagegen.last.fm/basicrt10/recenttracks/GodComplex07.gif

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(#3) October 31, 2008 4:58:47 PM
*Myaka
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Re: gimme your critique plz :D

Need more contrast (add darker parts)
Lines are rude (use fadings, make them thinner, idk)
some more detail required (looking a bit simple now)
+^what Tree Fighter said

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(#4) November 01, 2008 8:04:18 PM
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Re: gimme your critique plz :D

Update really brought it together. I like.

http://www.benchsketch.com/ | http://www.benchsketch.deviantart.com/

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(#5) November 01, 2008 8:09:07 PM
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Re: gimme your critique plz :D

looking good, i don't like those birds though, they bug me for some reason, but the coloring and linework isn't too shabby. wink

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/6098/dieselyt2.jpg

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(#6) November 02, 2008 12:35:17 AM
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Re: gimme your critique plz :D

I like. smile

Sig in the making.

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(#7) November 02, 2008 4:59:06 AM
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Re: gimme your critique plz :D

myaka said all,more contrast and details please ^^

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(#8) November 04, 2008 2:30:33 AM
Chan
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Re: gimme your critique plz :D

V1 is better, but not saying V2 is bad either, it's too noisy in places, that scatter dot brushes? they're in too many places, try to keep it simple, then it'll be good though. smile..

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(#9) November 04, 2008 8:57:31 AM
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Re: gimme your critique plz :D

New one is better.

Previously edited by Tree Fighter (November 04, 2008 8:57:49 AM)


http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g73/lillaosboy/8-14300-1.png
http://imagegen.last.fm/basicrt10/recenttracks/GodComplex07.gif

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(#10) November 04, 2008 9:23:03 AM
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Re: gimme your critique plz :D

Oh woow immense mate! so original and great! how do you do such fantastic work. Thank you

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(#11) November 09, 2008 8:37:08 AM
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Re: gimme your critique plz :D

i rreally like the update

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