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(#1) October 28, 2008 3:18:31 PM
elgortiz
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feedback

http://fc59.deviantart.com/fs35/i/2008/237/8/f/drown_by_elgortiz.jpg
http://fc90.deviantart.com/fs33/f/2008/237/1/2/Burn_by_elgortiz.jpg
feedback would be awesome on both of these

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(#2) October 28, 2008 3:39:36 PM
#zbush
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Re: feedback

really nice colors.  for the fire one you could use the pen tool or filter>liquify>twirl and see if you could make the side of his rib cage a fire effect.  just to break up that strong bright line of the side of him.  if you know what i am talking about with the pen and liquify tools then do that with other parts of the body as well to sell the fact he is made of fire.

for the work, to make the work more interesting, leave his entire coat, shirt, hat, and scarf mostly visible and make his face waterlike.  just an idea.  keep it up man!

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(#3) October 28, 2008 3:44:18 PM
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Re: feedback

zbush wrote:

really nice colors.  for the fire one you could use the pen tool or filter>liquify>twirl and see if you could make the side of his rib cage a fire effect.  just to break up that strong bright line of the side of him.  if you know what i am talking about with the pen and liquify tools then do that with other parts of the body as well to sell the fact he is made of fire.

for the work, to make the work more interesting, leave his entire coat, shirt, hat, and scarf mostly visible and make his face waterlike.  just an idea.  keep it up man!

ill def try it

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(#4) October 28, 2008 4:37:36 PM
#Lawlhalla
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Re: feedback

try and leave the water effects alone, everybody does them now.


http://sushi-vegas.net/upload/files/823654742_anakin_skymo.jpg

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(#5) October 28, 2008 5:58:53 PM
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i think its to much light on the first work and the fire on the second is overcontrasted in my eye's^^

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(#6) October 28, 2008 6:03:46 PM
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Re: feedback

The lighting/color combo on the second one rocks, but not so much on the first

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