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(#1) October 25, 2008 7:29:08 PM
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The Energy

http://fc35.deviantart.com/fs35/i/2008/ … sketch.jpg

Above version here
http://benchsketch.deviantart.com/art/t … -101753044

Also a darker version here
http://benchsketch.deviantart.com/art/t … -101752816

Does it mesh well?
And how are the colors?

Edit...

http://fc61.deviantart.com/fs33/i/2008/302/5/9/the_Light_Energy_by_benchsketch.jpg
http://benchsketch.deviantart.com/art/t … -101753044

This one is a lot darker, and the moon is now gone.

http://fc25.deviantart.com/fs33/i/2008/299/3/4/the_Dark_Energy_by_benchsketch.jpg
http://benchsketch.deviantart.com/art/t … -101752816

This one is tweaked a little darker, trying to make the moon fit into the image more.


Were the lighter colors better? (I left the original as a link up top).
And now the moon is gone from one. Dark with moon no better?

Previously edited by benchsketch (October 28, 2008 5:46:49 PM)

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(#2) October 25, 2008 7:31:25 PM
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Re: The Energy

The colors are nice, everything is nice except something about the moon bothers me.

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(#3) October 25, 2008 7:44:23 PM
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Re: The Energy

Hmm... someone else told me the same thing.... but I am kind of lazy...

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(#4) October 25, 2008 10:26:29 PM
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Re: The Energy

yea remove the moon...

the planet tree thing is too yellow but i like it

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(#5) October 26, 2008 6:37:05 AM
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Re: The Energy

Nice flow. Only the moon disturbs it a little bit. If I were in your shoes, I would reduce the opacity a trifle or remove the moon.

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(#6) October 26, 2008 11:50:31 AM
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Re: The Energy

Thats some nice stuff right there m8.

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(#7) October 26, 2008 7:54:25 PM
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Re: The Energy

The moon doesn't look blended with the other elements in the piece that may be why many people aren't feeling it, myself personally I don't like the monotone look the tree, earth, clouds and galaxy share.

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(#8) October 27, 2008 4:05:14 AM
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Re: The Energy

great work man.i like the colors and the composing...
i dont want to say anything bout the moon, i think its allready done big_smile
nice

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(#9) October 27, 2008 6:18:27 AM
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Re: The Energy

BastArt wrote:

Nice flow. Only the moon disturbs it a little bit. If I were in your shoes, I would reduce the opacity a trifle or remove the moon.

yes word

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(#10) October 27, 2008 11:58:53 AM
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Re: The Energy

wow, the color is nice... looking good..

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(#11) October 28, 2008 5:48:59 PM
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Re: The Energy

fixed the da link for full size On the update up top.

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(#12) October 28, 2008 5:52:51 PM
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Re: The Energy

i like the second one.

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(#13) October 28, 2008 7:14:06 PM
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Re: The Energy

The colour is a bit too monotonous, however I love the compo and effects.

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(#14) October 29, 2008 12:16:33 PM
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Re: The Energy

nice work!  have you thought about reducing the moons size and making it closer to the left side of the earth since that is where the brightest light source is coming from and the moon's shadow is on the left side?  and you could maybe have some of the strands of lights go around it.

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(#15) November 01, 2008 5:34:38 AM
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Re: The Energy

Very nice work.

I think the moon is not necessary, but it gives an nice effect..
I love the tree...

But v2 is too colorfull.
Just hold it by v1,

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