Cool!
Not sure if it should be vertically centered, maybe you should move it down a bit?

he probably means that you have to align all of the piece to the lower right corner.
i actually think so too.
and maybe pick different types. but thats personal.

what is that typeface called? and is there a version that is not distressed?

Looks alright. You have uneven kerning between a lot of letters. For example the Q & U are way too close relative to the rest of the text. Also, I'm not totally sure what order I'm supposed to read everything in, so maybe arrange it in such a way that it's easier to read. Oh and maybe use a clean version of the typeface? If you wanna distress it, best results always come from doing it by hand

AxPx wrote:

Looks alright. You have uneven kerning between a lot of letters. For example the Q & U are way too close relative to the rest of the text. Also, I'm not totally sure what order I'm supposed to read everything in, so maybe arrange it in such a way that it's easier to read. Oh and maybe use a clean version of the typeface? If you wanna distress it, best results always come from doing it by hand

Oh. I get what you mean. It's supposed to not really make sense but make sense if that isn't confusing. But i'll work  on the rest.

The paper texture that the piece was based on isn't appealing to the eye and doesn't do it justice along with that the colors and font can be worked upon. Overall if more time was spent on this piece than it could of been so much better than what it is now.

nice i realy like it