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(#1) September 18, 2008 11:17:44 AM
loaloa
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Red

My first post. What do you think about it? Thanks!

http://www.loaloa.net/IMG/jpg/Red.jpg

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(#2) September 18, 2008 3:47:12 PM
*Myaka
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Re: Red

I personally think it is creepy. And it is technically just bad.
Composition is bad, colors are bad and blending is totally out.
I'm sorry but I absolutely don't like it.

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(#3) September 19, 2008 2:50:13 AM
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Re: Red

that stars hardly!

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(#4) September 19, 2008 10:06:58 AM
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Re: Red

Myaka wrote:

I personally think it is creepy. And it is technically just bad.
Composition is bad, colors are bad and blending is totally out.
I'm sorry but I absolutely don't like it.

I agree . In same points .

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(#5) September 19, 2008 3:49:12 PM
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Re: Red

you guys are fools. hes clearly aiming to be creepy , i think it lacks balance, i know ur putting out a message here but im not too sure what it is,if your not then its just randomness at its best, as for the color it is a bit too deep for this, try something lighter or not as strong of a color, keep at it man

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(#6) September 22, 2008 7:43:58 AM
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Re: Red

And now?

http://www.loaloa.net/IMG/jpg/CreepyWorld.jpg

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(#7) September 23, 2008 8:23:46 AM
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Re: Red

it looks much better than the 1st one, i think the watch and the barcode a lil too big or something, you could resize it or maybe warp it more to add a dynamic feeling in it IMHO

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(#8) September 23, 2008 8:34:33 AM
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Re: Red

warungkopi wrote:

it looks much better than the 1st one, i think the watch and the barcode a lil too big or something, you could resize it or maybe warp it more to add a dynamic feeling in it IMHO

exactly what i think of these works...
the first one is not so good man..but now.the second is ok wink go on like that...

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(#9) September 23, 2008 10:39:32 AM
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Re: Red

2nd is much better, the color in the first was very overpowering.  You've got the right idea just keep trying out different stuff. smile

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(#10) September 24, 2008 8:39:19 AM
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Re: Red

srr dude this lp is not great
it sucks
:+(


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