kinda new and old stuff. :p
Hope you like.

http://nicogamer.deviantart.com/art/Sup … n-97466951


http://nicogamer.deviantart.com/art/Hal … r-97466525


http://nicogamer.deviantart.com/art/Kil … t-97466739


http://nicogamer.deviantart.com/art/Gra … s-97466245

Previously edited by nicogamer. (September 9th, 2008 10:41 AM)

First one is so strange but I somehow like it!
Second is a bit trendy and central part misses something like main piece of ground on which all objects are standing. What I'm trying to say, they just hanging in air now and don't interact with each other propertly. (hope it makes sence)
But overall - is is cool and have potential.
Third one is nice I think but I'm not a fan of this "direction" and know nothing about it so I won't comment.
Last one is inspired by Hejz I assume? Well, it is eye-catching but flame is too sharp, main object is barely visible, some additional ligting work will be good and most important - please, think of adding background to it. It will add volume and deepness to that picture.
Really like what you're doing man, but some more work is needed here and there.

edit: checked dA version of last pic. Add background and that's it - no changes to flame are needed, great work!

Previously edited by Myaka (September 9th, 2008 4:21 PM)

first the bg red is a bit garish
2nd i like
3rd i like but the repeat in the bg needs to change coz the lines just stop
4th idk really good flames if you created em but don't really understand it

overall good work and nice ideas

You shouldn't really understand it. :p

Myaka wrote:

First one is so strange but I somehow like it!
Second is a bit trendy and central part misses something like main piece of ground on which all objects are standing. What I'm trying to say, they just hanging in air now and don't interact with each other propertly. (hope it makes sence)
But overall - is is cool and have potential.
Third one is nice I think but I'm not a fan of this "direction" and know nothing about it so I won't comment.
Last one is inspired by Hejz I assume? Well, it is eye-catching but flame is too sharp, main object is barely visible, some additional ligting work will be good and most important - please, think of adding background to it. It will add volume and deepness to that picture.
Really like what you're doing man, but some more work is needed here and there.

edit: checked dA version of last pic. Add background and that's it - no changes to flame are needed, great work!

Nah no inspiration by Hejz, to be honest I didn't saw something like that from him yet. Good, I'll do it with a background (remix) since a few people would like one. Thanks mate!

GOOD!

heh, thanks.