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(#1) August 18, 2008 7:58:37 AM
kri
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warhol

http://krigfx.com/warhol.jpg
http://krigfx.com/warhol.jpg


Hey'all, im quite new here- some c&c would be great!

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(#2) August 18, 2008 7:52:33 PM
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Re: warhol

hmm, i think you need a better focal
and that W shouldnt be on the render

also try to add some stuff at the background smile


- d(o_0)b -

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(#3) August 19, 2008 10:20:08 AM
inXTR3Mis
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Re: warhol

rework you focal with the c4d and add maybe more blur around the render self.

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(#4) August 19, 2008 11:01:35 AM
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Re: warhol

The text works as your focal here not good.

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(#5) August 22, 2008 9:26:52 AM
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Re: warhol

the focal is not good,make more light by the render,

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