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- poisonvectors
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- From: Costa Rica
- Registered: April 21, 2008
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Re: freedom
you would get a lot more feedback if you followed the rules just fyi.
as for the piece it seems way too copy and pasted for my tastes. the woman is too over exposed compared to her surroundings. looks rushed
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- Weezy
- stop drinkin that hatorade
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- Registered: April 15, 2007
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Re: freedom
the purple in the piece rly doesn't fit and the lady like street said is too bright....there's rly no lighting in the BG except for the lighthouse light and the girl has a huge bright white lighting spot on the left side of her dress...it's like an odd combination of different types of art that aren't rly needed together...u got one lil bit of vector....mostly manip...and then some c4d......my advice if you would consider editing it is to take out the c4d....and take out the vector that goes along with the guitar and get rid of the insane lighting on her and it will be better
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- poisonvectors
- poisonvectors
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Re: freedom
thanks for critics i appreciated
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- bumblebee
- 1st jamaican Superhero
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- From: Houston, Tx
- Registered: March 21, 2008
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Re: freedom
The lighting isn't right dude. If the only source in the picture is the tower, then how can there be such a white light on her dress... You need to brun her dress a little or add a white lighting effect to the music player thing infront of her.
remove the blue thing on the guitar... it's fit right.
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