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BrianPhilip
Football-playing Cowboy in Space
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I've been working on this piece on and off for a while now because I'm not sure how to improve on it. Earlier I almost considered it finished but the colors seemed not interesting enough, though when I experimented they didn't look that great... If anyone can help give me feedback on this piece it would be much appreciated, thanks! smile

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WillG
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Sharpen, high pass. Overlay. Then it'd look amazing. smile


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zer0nyx
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That's good as it is smile
But, you could maybe darken more around the black side of the planetso it doesn't look slightly 2d.

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BrianPhilip
Football-playing Cowboy in Space
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Thanks for the feedback! I tried out the highpass/overlay and I gotta say it looks good - better contrast.

As for the planet, I'll have to come back to the piece later and see if I notice it more; it doesn't seem to be standing out too too bad but I need to view it in fresh eyes. smile

Previously edited by BrianPhilip (August 21st, 2011 3:42 PM)


"Okay dude, calm down. Take a chill pill. If you don't have a chill pill, take one of those chill strips. You put it on your tongue, it dissolves, chill."

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