I made about 6 new pieces and wanted to know about suggestions and imporvments .... do tell me

Nice effects keep working on them!

thank you

kiss of the wind is my favorite...nice works

1 needs a lot of coloring work for girl’s photo.
And all detail around her a bit rude. Some smaller particles and elements would help.
Also some of décor elements are very big, in this case they becoming stand-alone objects, so you have to effect/detail them too.

2. Nice expression, but I think lines don’t fit. They must have form of cone to fit photo. Some more detail on background, underlining main character wouldn’t hurt.

3. Very good. Waved lines need more work and décor a bit rude again, but practice makes it perfect. I enjoyed watching it.

4. Not getting it…

5. Good detail, colors are fine (but color of what coming from her mouth not mach rest of picture. The main problem of this piece – it’s trendy as hell. I mean this kind of pic was made like million times or so.

6. Space looks like shit. No depth, stars are low quality, color is awful. Same goes to cellphone, plus wrong perspective here, same goes to effects, very rude. Really don’t like this one, sorry.

Overall: some interesting stuff here, but needs a lot of work. For the first time you can copy works of other artists to get your skills up, but you must develop your own style as soon as possible. Hope it helped…

mekara wrote:

kiss of the wind is my favorite...nice works

thanks

Myaka wrote:

1 needs a lot of coloring work for girl’s photo.
And all detail around her a bit rude. Some smaller particles and elements would help.
Also some of décor elements are very big, in this case they becoming stand-alone objects, so you have to effect/detail them too.

2. Nice expression, but I think lines don’t fit. They must have form of cone to fit photo. Some more detail on background, underlining main character wouldn’t hurt.

3. Very good. Waved lines need more work and décor a bit rude again, but practice makes it perfect. I enjoyed watching it.

4. Not getting it…

5. Good detail, colors are fine (but color of what coming from her mouth not mach rest of picture. The main problem of this piece – it’s trendy as hell. I mean this kind of pic was made like million times or so.

6. Space looks like shit. No depth, stars are low quality, color is awful. Same goes to cellphone, plus wrong perspective here, same goes to effects, very rude. Really don’t like this one, sorry.

Overall: some interesting stuff here, but needs a lot of work. For the first time you can copy works of other artists to get your skills up, but you must develop your own style as soon as possible. Hope it helped…

I understood all you said and will surely try to improve in my future stuff thanks

GOOD!

mydelicious wrote:

GOOD!

thank you very very much

not too bad

thanks

Love the Converse ad. ;]

i totally dig the kiss of the wind picture... nice art bro

None really grab me sorry.

I fiind the effects way to vibrant, or way to plain on most of them. Some of them are good concepts with a good start but some of the effects break them.