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nova
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http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs32/i/2008/186/7/3/l__avant_garde_by_embrace1.png

http://embrace1.deviantart.com/art/l-av … e-90630808

some old abused sketches with ps postwork smile

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Romaniac
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I really like this. the only thing that drew my attention is the grey circle on the left side, right on the edge of the paper, it just doesn't look right ...

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Quintessenze
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this is really cool, nice style the red and gray spots arent working for me though, try more organic shapes.


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madewithcolors
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nice illustrations!!
maybe you should rotate one of the faces a quarter and remove the others...place that face behind the text and shapes...
just a idea wink

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+mw.Chem
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gray circle draws away attention from the focal. Other than that it looks good.

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*.cletuS
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kill that circle yea

rest is hawt


lawlhalla is my master

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