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http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/273/9/2/point_blank_by_pmiester-d5gd710.png

http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/273/c/e/form_by_pmiester-d5gd7g2.png - Not finished aka stuck

Trying to get back into it...

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any feedback?

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They both seem a bit bright. I would avoid using lens flares - they tend to look kind of cheesy. I like the splatter effect, but It may be good to try to vary your technique more though out the piece. As it is, the effect becomes somewhat repetitive and boring when it covers the whole piece. Keep experimenting with new ways to disguise and differentiate your technique throughout the piece. You want people to wonder how something was made, and not e so direct when you're working iwth abstract design/art. Keep up the work, hope I helped somewhat...

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Definitely did man, Thanks

 
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