what do u think? critique it if u can.

very cool!

Some interesting effects in there, I think there's always a balance between pushing out lots of colours in a nice arrangement and maintaining focus on your main composition. It may seem that the front blue circles in the foreground overpower your main subject, even though it's good to get some depth in your piece. I also think some of the lights you have in there are a bit too strong, with the blue light eyes being an example as well as some of the other bright spots in the piece. I think the next step for you is generally looking at how lighting reflects and refracts from various objects, and considering you have many light sources here, see how they interact with each other. Light is multidirectional, and perhaps it can bring a touch of realism to your work.

The typo although it looks interesting doesn't seem to complement the rest of the piece thematically, maybe it is a piece in itself where you emphasise breaking rocks and disrupted letterforms.

i think Husam summed it up perfectly.. the style is nice and contemporary but the 'lights' are a little too overpowering... and the type doesnt fit into the rest of the image...

Definitely agree with the previous posts about the lights being a bit overpowering and to try and work with them. Part of me wants to believe that the bottom orb-like shape should be the main source of light in the piece, like everything should come from that because that's just how my eyes want to see it. Maybe you want it to be the eyes, or those abstract ring shapes that take up a lot of the attention in the piece. Either way, I feel like the light should come from SOMEWHERE.