http://www.behance.net/gallery/The-Lion-King/3213085 Hope you like

Previously edited by Jeppebc (February 25th, 2012 11:13 AM)

Constructive feedback please

I like the image, only thing tha tbothers me personall is the monotone-ness of the image

I will keep that in mind in my next piece, thank you

I somewhat agree about the monotone nature of the piece you have here, I think introducing new tones and reducing a bit of the saturation in areas would benefit the work. As a starting composition I think it's nice, but I think more work could have been done to introduce some depth and realism to the piece. The background has somewhat been worked on but it doesn't feel like the lion in the centre is really standing out, and again the same blue tone contributes to that. What if there are foreground rocks flying around and things happening in the piece that make the piece feel more alive and active? Try to understand the big picture of what's happening in the piece, what's the story being told, and how can you integrate that into your work?

As for the lion, I think it could integrate better with the multiple light effects directly behind it, as in a way it feels like you've done those effects and just added the lion on top. If you can blend those a little bit better instead of a drop shadow then I think there's some strength in that.

Keep up working, hope this helps.

Husam wrote:

I somewhat agree about the monotone nature of the piece you have here, I think introducing new tones and reducing a bit of the saturation in areas would benefit the work. As a starting composition I think it's nice, but I think more work could have been done to introduce some depth and realism to the piece. The background has somewhat been worked on but it doesn't feel like the lion in the centre is really standing out, and again the same blue tone contributes to that. What if there are foreground rocks flying around and things happening in the piece that make the piece feel more alive and active? Try to understand the big picture of what's happening in the piece, what's the story being told, and how can you integrate that into your work?

As for the lion, I think it could integrate better with the multiple light effects directly behind it, as in a way it feels like you've done those effects and just added the lion on top. If you can blend those a little bit better instead of a drop shadow then I think there's some strength in that.

Keep up working, hope this helps.

Definitely agree with that. Add more to the lion, try doing more to it to make it look less overly sharpened and more alive.