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First work needs some contrast and depth,aswell as a light source.I would love to see the original size of second work,but from this view,it looks great imho.
The first - and only - thing I'm going to say to you is that if you're going to work with only one side of the page, cut the other side (with all the negative space) off when you're done. You've got two awesome pieces here, but the negative space takes away from them a little in my opinion.
thanks to both of you, I fixed the first one
The Second one is here
Previously edited by TheSpinxSage (January 15th, 2011 4:14 AM)
these look good, i agree, the negative space is a little much other than that, awesome job