my Last Piece i hope do you like it
http://imrony.deviantart.com/#/d2t23qg
http://imrony.deviantart.com/#/d2t23qg
http://imrony.deviantart.com/#/d2t23qg

hey,

first thing i notice about this peice is the lighting. the lighting is totally wrong on nearly every object placed in this manipulation.  the lighting should be coming from behind the peice according to the sunset stock used. but the lighting on the bridge is on the other side, the side we can see. same for the statue. the waterfall is coming ffrom nowhere on th left. there needs to be source for that. keep working and expanding and this can be great

hey thx for coment i work more

Hi,
first off I agree with Cletus. Other things you have to consider when you create a manipulation are the perspectives and scales of all objects you want to add to your composition. If you look at the whole picture the bridge should be shown from the top, but actually the shot was taken from below the bridge so it looks weird. The statue looks as if it is just about to fall into the water because the photo was taken from a totally different angle. Also, the levels of sharpness are different. The bridge seems to be much detailed than the bushes and plants around it, which doesn't help blending at all.
Hope this was a bit helpful.

hya kire thx very much

i like it , caught my eye at a glance but the more i looked at it the gazeebo looking thing is kinda just put there and the angle looks like you overlayed the layers untill it blended in good enough .. but overall i like your art , you got a good eye and i like were your taking it

gracias por comentar