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- Phritz
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All The Right Dreams & Beautifully Confined
My 2 favorite pieces, Terraspace wise:
All The Right Dreams:
Beautifully Confined
And my current tag is the first tag I made after 2 years of not making a tag O.o
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- *edlo
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Re: All The Right Dreams & Beautifully Confined
Second one its not bad, I dont agree with Gucken at all but its ok.
The first piece I am guessing you want serious feedback so have a sit and keep in mind this is constructive crit, although it will probably hurt 
*Dont use ready made stock planets.
*Dont use Hubble images.
*Dont use ready made starfields.
*Dont use premade cheezy star fx
*Less is More.
*Keep in mind the distances in space, dont treat a several lightyears wide nebula as a tabletop object, nor a gas giant as a tennis ball, they dont receive or emit light in the same way our brain is used to look at.
*Work on a compo sketch before you throw everything but the kitchen sink in there.
*Color compo and feel are the most important tools the space artist has work at them.
Finally; Lindsey looks cute 
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- *kire
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Re: All The Right Dreams & Beautifully Confined
first one is kinda chaotic and some of the vector effects look strange, also I agree with ed about the premade stuff. Space art is all about creating yourself. 
The feeling of the second one is really nice though.
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