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(#1) December 04, 2009 7:33:14 AM
Sagim
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(#2) December 04, 2009 1:38:39 PM
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Re: Underworld

i like this for some reason i cant put my finger on......

however the lighting on your chick is wrong. the fire is below her, and nothing else is lit from top left as harshly as she is. this kinda makes it look like shes on top of the scene, rather than part of it. know what i mean?


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(#3) December 05, 2009 9:01:12 AM
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Re: Underworld

i agree, i also think you could maybe add more atmospheric effects like the ash to make her feel more part of the scene, keep up the good work though smile


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(#4) December 05, 2009 12:46:10 PM
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Re: Underworld

You need to work on the shading and illumination to make this really fit in, keep in mind big fire coming from bellow, no clear straight light coming from above. So with this at hand piece should be darker and main illumination its coming from the fire. Besides that the girl stock seems unfitting and unrelated to the scene.

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