Hello,

And a new creation this time based on the water theme inspired by a creation of Pierre doucin :



;D

Previously edited by Midnight Street (October 22nd, 2009 12:08 PM)

looks cool, but seems unfinished

Yeah I hesitated to add more splashes effects, do you think it could be better with some more ?

Maybe more triangles on the background and a not so flat background too.. otherwise is cool

i really like the left leg and foot.  those triangles are far out

Definately looks unfinished. Add more fx, maybe a texture to the background, a shadow of the guy and some foreground fx for depth. On a side note, unless its just for practice, I would stay away from using that stock simply because it has been used so many times.

not trying to knock on ur skills cus theyre legit but ive seen this stock used soo much that even if u had the illist effects on there it wouldnt catch my attention so while i think ur effects n skills are sic this over all this piece doesnt excite meh sry bra

yeah, im digging the work you did, but this stock, recycled. But it's cool what you have so far. I would like to see how you finish it out honestly.

I'm Working on it

considering its alled water walk, there isnt all that much water, maybe try adding a proper water floor that he is walking on and splashing

New version :

Previously edited by Midnight Street (October 23rd, 2009 7:27 AM)

Good job! Nice flow and depth, my eyes lead right to the face. KUI

jaxeNL fan much? looks well done though.

No, I did'nt knew it before your post, but as said in my first post it's a Pierre Doucin's piece inspired work !

Update looks a lot better, the only thing I dont like is the facial area, it just seems like...exploded. haha