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(#1) November 26, 2009 6:22:47 PM
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I Need an Opinion/Help on this.

This is what iv'e got so far.

http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee316/veilx/Simulation.png

I don't really like the head... that should i do to it?.. can you give me an Idea?... Also I think I might start over - it seems to messy.

Any suggestions?. Thanks. big_smile


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(#2) November 27, 2009 1:45:28 AM
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Re: I Need an Opinion/Help on this.

I would suggest cleaning it up a little bit, adding more detail, and then a background. Then post an update.

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(#3) November 27, 2009 3:05:49 AM
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Re: I Need an Opinion/Help on this.

This was my original Idea. Iv'e got nothing to do but to work on it now - Also, i'll add a Background later, I still don't know what to put in it. Thanks. big_smile

Also, I could still use some tips on the head, I don't know what to do with that. tongue


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(#4) November 27, 2009 7:02:18 AM
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Re: I Need an Opinion/Help on this.

This topic should be in Showcase really, but no matter.

The head is fine, just neaten the whole thing up and work on the shading, get it smooth from one side to the other. The only thing I could say about the person is maybe make the pose more dynamic, it's a little stiff at the moment.


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(#5) November 27, 2009 4:55:49 PM
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Re: I Need an Opinion/Help on this.

I agree with it's pose, Thanks! - Also, I was going to put this in the showcase, but I Need more help than I wanted to show it off.


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(#6) November 28, 2009 10:01:44 PM
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Re: I Need an Opinion/Help on this.

Ughh, I tried to clean it up, but it's just to hard and it doesn't look good, how can I adjust the pressure sensitivity to control the opacity and thickness at the same time on my wacom tablet via photoshop?. Help?. Thanks :]


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(#7) November 29, 2009 7:32:46 AM
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Re: I Need an Opinion/Help on this.

Go to the brush options and on the opacity and line windows, select pen pressure. And to clean this up, you'll need to re-do the whole thing rather than trying to neaten up the lines by adding/taking away. Make a new layer over the whole thing and make the original layer a non-obtrusive colour like light pink/blue or something and then start to re-draw the image.


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(#8) November 29, 2009 11:07:49 AM
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Re: I Need an Opinion/Help on this.

I agree with everything DP and Jakska said, it does need to be cleaned up. Try what Jakska said to do it Ps, then another update, Im anxious to see wsup.


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(#9) November 30, 2009 2:26:28 AM
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Re: I Need an Opinion/Help on this.

it's definitely messy, i think it has a long way to go man. there are some good tips here so use them and you should come out with something nice smile

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