Hi !

Here is a 'text art' around the word "alive". I have just done the first two letters ( A & L) and I was wondering if I should continue or leave this artwork. What do you think ?

Thank you for helping

http://i88.servimg.com/u/f88/11/28/68/54/alive210.jpg

letter/text art can be extremely creative.. maybe this could help influence you: i've seen (and done) this form many times, however, what people will do is use the letter(s) and find common things that 'look' like them.. it's kind of hard to explain, but for instance, my friend spelled her name with the letters, but drew things that resembled the letters.. in other words, tangible objects..

looks really great so far,  keep it going!

I would definitely carry on with it, it's got loads of potential, and a nice original concept - like anmi said, text art is an extremely creative and versatile style of art - just use ideas that pop into your head, anything that could resemble a coherent looking letter.

I think you should carry on making it. I think it's a fantastic piece of artwork and it will be better. keep on working on it!

amazing ..

Yeah that's an awesome start i say keep goin.

it looks really good so far, i agree that it has alot of potential also, imo try and make the letters more...not noticable?

it's beautiful and very creative! i really think you should carry on with it

Druss wrote:

Hi !

Here is a 'text art' around the word "alive". I have just done the first two letters ( A & L) and I was wondering if I should continue or leave this artwork. What do you think ?

Thank you for helping

http://i88.servimg.com/u/f88/11/28/68/54/alive210.jpg

Finally I continued on this one, but made something a bit different :

http://givemethemusic.free.fr/1251281329.jpg

Advices are very welcome

im sorry but it looked better before

Can you explain why please ?
Is it the last element on the right who doesn't look good ? Or ?